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Old 11-26-2007, 01:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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New from the ground that bears me
Swinging in tides to take root
I shake free from the tendrils
And taste the budding spirit of form

Before me the road stands ready
And I abide the seed to roam
Dark from the sun that loves me
Eager for what waits to be seen

Eyes that long for the wonders
Heady from a soul full of dreams
Autumn sometimes comes quick
Leaves can get caught in a storm

Far from the tree that bound me
I fell to freedom and you mourn
My step has never faltered
Nor wistful for yesterdays

I have reached the banks of this river
To a destiny we have always known
And for the crossing I stand ready
To taste the quiet spirit of home
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Old 11-26-2007, 07:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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New from the ground that bears me
Swinging in tides to take root
I shake free from the tendrils
And taste the budding spirit of form

Before me the road stands ready
And I abide the seed to roam
Dark from the sun that loves me
Eager for what waits to be seen

Eyes that long for the wonders
Heady from a soul full of dreams
Autumn sometimes comes quick
Leaves can get caught in a storm

Far from the tree that bound me
I fell to freedom and you mourn
My step has never faltered
Nor wistful for yesterdays

I have reached the banks of this river
To a destiny we have always known
And for the crossing I stand ready
To taste the quiet spirit of home
how do i delete this ...i posted it twice cus it needed moderator approval.
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Old 11-30-2007, 12:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Rhymey but it works. I liked your usage of abide. Not too many folks can pull that one off. Right on.
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