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Old 11-22-2007, 09:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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gone

he's gone, he's left
six years, two kids and few pets
we danced, we sang, we twostepped
traveled from east to west, north to south
i beaded, i sewed, i cooked, i know
the work, the strain, the happiness....the pain
for what i ask? for who i ask? why i ask?
the answer is always the same- i dunno?
this was a stupid game
in his mind, i hope he knows,
now in my heart, love for him does not grow
so good luck to him-
good luck getting ready for next powwow season
good luck finding someone to sew
good luck finding someone who knows: tricut? satin? brocade?
good luck finding someone to sing with
good luck finding someone to braid
good luck finding someone who knows the powwow trade
come this sping you will see: me
new dress
new beadwork
beautiful tiny tot kids
with shinny new outfits
singing again
dancing again
playing again
so he's gone, who cares? don't you see i win!
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Old 11-23-2007, 08:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 11-23-2007, 06:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks very much and happy holidays all will be well im sure of it
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Originally Posted by nessadawn25 View Post
he's gone, he's left
six years, two kids and few pets
we danced, we sang, we twostepped
traveled from east to west, north to south
i beaded, i sewed, i cooked, i know
the work, the strain, the happiness....the pain
for what i ask? for who i ask? why i ask?
the answer is always the same- i dunno?
this was a stupid game
in his mind, i hope he knows,
now in my heart, love for him does not grow
so good luck to him-
good luck getting ready for next powwow season
good luck finding someone to sew
good luck finding someone who knows: tricut? satin? brocade?
good luck finding someone to sing with
good luck finding someone to braid
good luck finding someone who knows the powwow trade
come this sping you will see: me
new dress
new beadwork
beautiful tiny tot kids
with shinny new outfits
singing again
dancing again
playing again
so he's gone, who cares? don't you see i win!

That is really good, I like it! I hope it all works out for you. That poem kind of reads like my life a few years back.

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