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Poems are sneaky
I was down in the "I'm addicted" thread in the crafts forum when this one wormed its way into me:
You're gone now, Mama - I was sad and lonely for you, But I found your stash, Your calico, your cotton prints, your suitings, your linen. They told me - "A dress, a blouse, a fine pair of slacks will hold you and caress you now - your hands will shape me and stroke my hair and comfort me while I continue my journey." And I smiled as the dress, the blouse, the fine pair of slacks took their forms as you directed from the road you are traveling. And when I pull them around me now, You are immortal. |
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You just gained very much respect from me as a writer and poet. This poem encapsulates the realization of the spirit's endlessness. It's eternal Zen. The last two lines are what makes this poem. You captured it perfectly. I haven't read anything this good in months, especially on here. Perfect!
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