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Old 06-20-2007, 01:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Somewhere

No rhyme or reason. Nowhere near my best.... but here it is.

*******

Somewhere in the recesses of my mind, you haunt me. Everything about you impassions me. Befuddles me. Thrills me. Confuses me. Makes me. Breaks me. Leads me. Loses me.

Somewhere in the corridors of my heart stands your memory. One from lifetimes ago. Will I know you again? In different skin? But the same soul deep within?

Somewhere in the center of my soul, your name is carved… like a monument to be held in highest regard.

Somewhere…. Some day... I’ll see you again. And perhaps this time, we can pick up where we left off.
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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No rhyme or reason. Nowhere near my best.... but here it is.

*******

Somewhere in the recesses of my mind, you haunt me. Everything about you impassions me. Befuddles me. Thrills me. Confuses me. Makes me. Breaks me. Leads me. Loses me.

Somewhere in the corridors of my heart stands your memory. One from lifetimes ago. Will I know you again? In different skin? But the same soul deep within?

Somewhere in the center of my soul, your name is carved… like a monument to be held in highest regard.

Somewhere…. Some day... I’ll see you again. And perhaps this time, we can pick up where we left off.


I"m here! Right here! Hey you! It's me!
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it a lot.
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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No rhyme or reason. Nowhere near my best.... but here it is.

*******
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Somewhere in the recesses of my mind, you haunt me.
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Everything about you impassions me. Befuddles me. Thrills me.
D7
Confuses me. Makes me. Breaks me. Leads me. Loses me.

Somewhere in the corridors of my heart stands your memory. One from lifetimes ago. Will I know you again? In different skin? But the same soul deep within?

Somewhere in the center of my soul, your name is carved… like a monument to be held in highest regard.

Somewhere…. Some day... I’ll see you again. And perhaps this time, we can pick up where we left off.

Geez use these chords.....add a funky beat and bass.....oh and maybe a chorus like :

Someday someway we will be together for ever
i may sometimes doubt and be sad
but I'll never say never...
Nothing compares to the love we had

and bingo! you too are an R&B star or at least an American Idol wannabe, but w/ your own material!!!

oh yeah about those agent fees??

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Old 06-21-2007, 02:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks guys.

LOL JG How bout I've got a few of those too! hahaha
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Wow, thats great.
Deep, like you want to tell him,
But your holding off till the right time.

Well, thats what it make me feel.
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