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Old 01-08-2007, 05:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Lightbulb "I am looking for this girl"

To every girl that is SCARED to
put her heart out there again,
because she has been HURT
too many times or so badly.

To every girl that has been
cheated on,
because she's not a slut
who gives it up to any guy.

To every girl that
dresses cute,
not skanky. <3

To every girl who
wants to be called
beautiful, not hott.

To every girl that will spend her
whole day looking
for the perfect present for you.

To every girl who gets her heart
broken, because he
chose the slut instead.

To every girl that would die
to have a decent boyfriend.
To every girl who would just once
like to be treated like a princess.

To every girl that won't get
down on her knees & open
her mouth just to get a boyfriend.

To every girl that
just wants to hold hands.
To every girl that
kisses him with meaning.

TO EVERY GIRL WHO JUST WISHES
HE CARED MORE.

To every girl who would just
once want a guy to give their
jacket up when they are cold.

To every girl who
just wants him to call.

To every girl who lies
awake at night thinking about him.

To every girl that
just wants to cuddle.

To every girl that
just wants to sleep with
him without having sex.

TO EVERY GIRL WHO SHOWS HOW MUCH
SHE CARES BUT GETS NOTHING BACK.

To every girl that thought
"maybe this one could be the one."

To every girl that laughs at stupid stuff
when she actually >>doesn't<< think it is funny.

To every girl who is just
looking for that one and
only and is having a rough
time along the way.

To every girl that doesn't want
a guy who just plays with her
emotions but actually cares about
how she feels.

TO EVERY GIRL WHO WANTS WORDS
BACKED UP WITH ACTIONS.

TO EVERY girl that FELL for ALL the LIES
ONLY TO FIND THEMSELVES ALONE in the END.

To every girl that gave her heart away
to have it shoved back in her face.

To every girl that has faith that
"tomorrow will be a better day."
And it will be.



Poem by. Tiffany Red Feather
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Old 01-08-2007, 05:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this one! You post alot of great poems, keep em comming!
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Old 01-08-2007, 06:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow, that was good.
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Old 01-08-2007, 06:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like that poem!!!!
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Old 01-08-2007, 06:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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this is too depressing.....LOL
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My poetry isn't all fluffy and puffy and creamy. I've grown out of that years ago.

I write for me. I write for all people. If people don't like my poetry that is cool too. Or if people dig my poetry; mores the pleasure

All I ask is for criticism good or ill.


Miigwech ya'll for all the feedback my friends....
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Do you keep these in a book or someting? Ive liked all your poems, I was touched by this one it rang so true in many ways im sure alot of ladies can relate. Thank-You for shareing your talent with us...
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Awesome OneidaDreamer

very nice thankyou.. From all the girls... hehe
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Old 01-09-2007, 01:11 AM   #10 (permalink)
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My Perception of Women

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Do you keep these in a book or someting? Ive liked all your poems, I was touched by this one it rang so true in many ways im sure alot of ladies can relate. Thank-You for shareing your talent with us...





I had a hardback journal 15 years ago; although it has gone on a journey all its own since those early daze. I wrote a poem called "Man Is A Fool". It was an early Feminist piece. I am a FEMINIST. It's how I've always believed.

I was told by my Father Melvin James Smith, to Respect Women above all else. To hold them sacred and to treat them like princesses. To never lay hands on a woman. Even if she hits you back. Just walk away from her. To cook meals for her and to make tea if she's feeling sick or on her moon or whatever her temperament at that time. I could go on, but I think you get the point.

My Father tried to taught me the right way to treat a woman and a philosophy too.


I just really feel for women. I see and feel what happens to them and how they are treated daily and it makes me sad. Women are sacred beings capable of bringing life into this world and raising and caring for their families. They get treated like crap constantly. They are manipulated and used and beaten and drugged and raped by unthinking selfish dishonorable fools.

Furthermore women are ignored and treated like sexual objects. What ever happened to snuggling and cuddling? Sex is a sacred and erotic act, not a tool to dominate and belittle women. Why do men call them *****ES and other names? That's just wrong to me. It is the complete antithesis of my beliefs! It really freaks me out and pisses me off to hear of that kind of treatment. Especially if it's one of my own.

I don't understand why anyone would treat a woman rudely or disrespectfully. It just doesn't make sense to me at all. Or strike her for that matter!!!


So this poem really touched me. I got all misty eyed. For real. Yes I cry lots. When I watch a movie where someone dies or whatever emotional stimulation I get; I cry. My Empathy knows no rival. I'm just me; Lanuhsi slehs or James Melvin Smith...


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Whats wrong with sex ?

A feminist man doesn't see anything wrong with a strong, sensual, sexual woman ......

If a woman wants sex instead of cuddling theres absolutely nothing wrong with that.........

If a woman sees sex as something mutualy pleasurable an not something sacred theres absolutely nothing wrong with that either.........

How many of yalls ladys would honestly get bored with nothing but "sacred sex" after a while ? lol


A feminist man doesn't turn a woman into a princess, an put her up on a pedistal, an wrap her up in bubble wrap to protect her from everything.......

He wants a woman to stand beside him as an equal.
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Old 01-09-2007, 10:05 AM   #13 (permalink)
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dang i really like this one a lot....
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