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Old 11-28-2006, 04:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Round Dance

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Round Dance


Lub dub, lub dub, lub dub, lub dub

Feel the rhythm

the heart beat of a nation...

Head nodding, body swaying

eyes closed, praying...

Loving the dance

holding your hand, for a moment

joyful in passing,

foot up, step down

shake hand, smile

around the circle...
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I think that this poem needs just a little bit more something...
It's a good poem, but I lacks that special umph. You know what I mean?
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