Round Dance

Paul G · 11-28-2006, 04:22 PM

Posted by Mrs.Renegade

Round Dance

Lub dub, lub dub, lub dub, lub dub

Feel the rhythm

the heart beat of a nation...

Head nodding, body swaying

eyes closed, praying...

Loving the dance

holding your hand, for a moment

joyful in passing,

foot up, step down

shake hand, smile

around the circle...

**OneidaDreamer** · 12-17-2006, 09:36 PM

I think that this poem needs just a little bit more something...
It's a good poem, but I lacks that special umph. You know what I mean?

11-28-2006, 04:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
Paul G Webmaster Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Lexington, SC Posts: 12,948 Blog Entries: 1	Round Dance Posted by Mrs.Renegade Round Dance Lub dub, lub dub, lub dub, lub dub Feel the rhythm the heart beat of a nation... Head nodding, body swaying eyes closed, praying... Loving the dance holding your hand, for a moment joyful in passing, foot up, step down shake hand, smile around the circle... __________________ New to the site--Introduce Yourself Need Help--FAQ--Search Feedback--Post your suggestions MyTribalSpace.com \| NativeGatherings.com \| PowWows.com Podcast \| Indigitunes.com NativeSeek.com \| Pow Wow TV \| Pow Wow Radio \| NativeMusicSource.com Radio \| NDN411.com \| eSnag Online Dating Pow Wow TV - Find out how you could win a 42" Plasma TV!

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12-17-2006, 09:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
OneidaDreamer PowWows.com Addicts Join Date: May 2006 Location: Oneida,Wisconsin Posts: 2,241	I think that this poem needs just a little bit more something... It's a good poem, but I lacks that special umph. You know what I mean?

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