Healing Dance Poem....very neat

wiconiwakan21 · 07-02-2005, 03:40 PM

I was going through my things today, and i came across this poem I wrote almsot 6 years agao. it's very neat. tell me what you think.

The healing dance
I dance in my dress
hoping to heal.
365 jingles in all,
hitting against each other.
The sound of the drum,
so loud,
so sacred.
I dance to the heartbeat,
hoping to heal.
I look around,
everyone staring.
I hold my head high,
knowing I am proud.
My heart is healed,
as is my soul.

**SingingDeer** · 07-09-2005, 01:22 AM

Very nice, I like it

Lakota_winyan · 07-12-2005, 01:52 PM

Yup, it's expresses a lot of feelings..

DancingCreek · 07-12-2005, 11:50 PM

Very nice!
Simply stated but very elegant.

**Summer_June** · 07-13-2005, 12:39 AM

thats really nice.

07-02-2005, 03:40 PM	#1 (permalink)
wiconiwakan21 Pow Wow Visitor Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 13	Healing Dance Poem....very neat I was going through my things today, and i came across this poem I wrote almsot 6 years agao. it's very neat. tell me what you think. The healing dance I dance in my dress hoping to heal. 365 jingles in all, hitting against each other. The sound of the drum, so loud, so sacred. I dance to the heartbeat, hoping to heal. I look around, everyone staring. I hold my head high, knowing I am proud. My heart is healed, as is my soul.

07-09-2005, 01:22 AM	#2 (permalink)
SingingDeer ~~~ Jedi Color Guard ~~~ Join Date: May 2005 Location: Washington State Posts: 13,603	Very nice, I like it __________________ "Liberty is the one thing you can't have unless you give it to others." ~ Wm A White "We could learn a lot from a box of crayons: some sharp, some pretty, some dull, some have weird names, & all different colors, but they have to learn to live in the same box." ~ Anon

07-13-2005, 12:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
Summer_June -tradish_hunni.-* Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Six Nations Posts: 1,215	thats really nice. __________________ ~PowWows.com Princess 2006-2007~

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07-12-2005, 01:52 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lakota_winyan Champion Dancer Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 2,402	Yup, it's expresses a lot of feelings..

07-12-2005, 11:50 PM	#4 (permalink)
DancingCreek Tiny Tot Dancer Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 49	Very nice! Simply stated but very elegant.

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